Monday 15 August 2016

Rosemary - Information Report Plan- Sun Yang T3W4

INFORMATION REPORT WRITING PLAN:
An Olympic Athlete


Title
Sun Yang
Introduction:
Opening Statement (no more than one sentence)
Brief description about about the key ideas in this report.
Sun Yang is an China olympics athlete,he is an freestyle swimming athlete.
Paragraph One
Olympics medals
Sun Yang now had already has six olympics medal and a team bronze medal,that six medal is 3 golden medal and 2 silver medal and a bronze medal,that six medal respectively in 2012 London Olympics 400 metre freestyle win a gold medal,200 metre freestyle win a silver medal,1500 metre freestyle got a gold medal,4x200 metre relay he won a bronze medal and 2016 Rio Olympics 400 metre freestyle win a silver medal and 200 metre freestyle win a gold medal.
Paragraph Two

Who helps Sun Yang to olympics
Sun Yang’s first teacher is ZhuYing.ZhuYing is the first one know Sun Yang’s height advantage and take Sun Yang to the summer swimming class,even use the white lie to Sun Yang’s family for,basketball’s best height is above 2.15,and volleyball’s best height is above 2.05.Sun Yang’s second teacher is Zhu Zhigen,SunYang follow Zhu Zhigen at when he is 12 years old,Sun Yang said Zhu Zhigen was the very important person in his life,although they conflict occurred.Zhang YaDong once become Sun Yang’s teacher.Then Zhu Zhigen because they reconciliation.
Paragraph Three

Why did Sun Yang on the olympics arena
Sun Yang had onto olympics arena many year,he start at 2008 beijing olympics.He first time stand on olympics games arena but regret out of the arena.his mentoring teacher is Zhu Ying,he was the first teacher for Sun Yang too,is Zhu Ying detection’s Sun Yang’s height advantage and take him to school,so can let Sun Yang lay a strong foundation.
Diagrams supported with information
Sun Yang’s grand total at now has 3 gold medal,2 silver medal and a bronze medal Screenshot 2016-08-12 at 11.57.35 AM.pngScreenshot 2016-08-12 at 11.55.56 AM.png
Conclusion
Sun Yang had broken the statement of the ‘chinaman's swimming group would be can’t get a gold medal forever’ and broken lots of the world record.He is a good swimmer.

That is my report/plan for the olympics athlete Sun Yang,There is the 3 big idea for Sun Yang .

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